Attention Robin
2010.02.28
There are now new versions of the following pages on the server. Those include your most recent corrections.
Editor’s note
In the Drugs page, subtitle ‘Update’, it seems to me that “would have grossly indecent” is missing something. May I suggest reading the whole sentence again, including a little “been” somewhere, like in would have been grossly indecent.
Please confirm whole sentence should stay as is. I’ll then remove the yellow marker.
It was a community standards offence where the jury in 2004 had to determine what people in 1982 would have grossly indecent.
Further in Drugs
While I was looking at the page again for consistency, two typos, or one error and a typo, sort of snuck up on me… under the Acid Trips sub-title.
A C I D T R I P S
It must of snuck up on me, but I knew to float downstream. It was over two weeks before I got some more LSD and could arranged an appropriate time and venue.
May I suggest
It must have snuck up on me, but I knew to float downstream.
It sort of snuck up on me, but I knew to float downstream.
Last line of same paragraph.
Should I leave arranged in the past tense?
and could arrange an appropriate time and venue.
POEMS ABOUT DRUGS
At the end of the page, below colophon, I added hyperlinks to more of your poetic texts in the Poetry section of this site.
Please confirm you want this.
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